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有的时候写封起诉信不失为七个消除办法,书信作文预测



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应用文考察类型:书信、通知

  考研[微博]时间将近,考研英语作文也到了名副其实的“押宝”环节,都教授认为小作文的四大重点分别为:邀请信,感谢信,投诉信,求职信。下面都教授针对投诉信,来指导考生如何攻克。

  很多考生可能都有过这样的困惑,为什么有些人的英语作文就能写得那么“任性”,挥洒自如还能屡获高分,从今天开始,老师就为你一一讲解几大书信的写作方法,让你也能轻轻松松写出“任性”作文!

书信作文预测:通知、投诉信、建议信、咨询信、求学(职)、请求信、感谢信、备忘录

  一、写作要点

  投诉信又可称为抱怨信,其主要目的是表达写信人对于某一情况的不满。人们在生活中经常会遇到一些不愉快的事情,比如消费利益受损、正常生活和工作受到干扰等,有时写封投诉信不失为一个解决办法。

预测作文范文

  投诉信是针对某件不快乐的事情向责任人提出的投诉、抱怨的信件,基本特征是反映问题,诉说原由,终极目的是解决问题。作者要首先肯定对方的做法或者描述情况,随后简述出现的问题。如果有必要继续说明具体问题,之后提出要求。具体作要点如下:

  投诉信通常包括以下几个方面的内容:说明投诉的原因并表示遗憾;实事求是地阐述问题发生的经过,切忌夸大其词;指出问题引起的后果;提出批评及处理意见,或敦促对方采取措施,或提出所希望的赔偿以及补救方式。

 通知

  1.首段开门见山指明所投诉的具体时间

  投诉信的写作策略:说明投诉问题——描述具体情况——期待解决方案。

Directions: Suppose your university is going to host a summer camp for
high school students. Write a notice to

  2.将问题清晰、简洁、公正地描述出来,指出事件给你带来的不便

  注意事项:写投诉信时语气要冷静、郑重、克制,不必过于礼貌。但也要就事论事,不能进行人身攻击。同时,在描述问题时尽量采用被动句式,使描述更加客观合理。

1) briefly introduce the camp activities, and

  3.感谢对方关注你的投诉,清楚地表明你想如何得到解决,并期待对方尽早解决问题。

  【相关真题】

2) call for volunteers.

  二、闪光句型

  Directions

Notice

  I’m writing to you because I need to complain to you about.。。

  Suppose you have found something wrong with the electronic
dictionary that you bought from an online store the other day ,Write an
email to the customer service center to

June 20, 2014

  这封信是想向你投诉.。。

  1)make a complaint and

To enrich extracurricular activities, our school intends to hold a
summer camp for students from high school on July 6, 2015. The event
will include English learning and basketball games.

  I’m sorry to point out the defect in the.。。

  2)demand a prompt solution

Thus, volunteers for this camp are badly needed to assist us in
organizing the relevant affairs, including reception, distribution of
documents, etc. Candidates must have adequate patience with the
adolescents. Besides, the volunteers ought to have outstanding skills at
English. Students who have previous experience as volunteers are
preferred.

  对不起我得指出.。。的毛病

  You should write about 100words on ANSERE SHEET 2.Do not sign your
own name at the end of the letter ,Use “Zhang Wei” instead.

Those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the
monitor of their classes before June 30, 2014.

  We wish to make the following complaints to you and hope you can do
something about it。

  【范文】

Peking University

  我们想向你们投诉以下问题,希望你们能予以解决

  Dear Sir or Madam,

投诉信

  I was shocked to find …purchased on …at… by us didn’t function
well。

  I am writing this letter to complain the quality of your product—an
electronic dictionary I bought in your online shop last week. Today, I
find the dictionary does not operate properly. For some reasons, the
battery can work only two days after last charging. What is worse, the
pronounce button of it does not function. Last but the worst, the screen
will shut down unexpectedly and randomly.

Direction: You just bought an English dictionary from a famous
e-commerce site only to find it not as good as you expected. Write an
email to the customer service center to

  我惊讶地发现,我们.。。日在.。。地购买的.。。不好用

  As the machine is under warranty, I would like to exchange it for
another one or get a refund. I am looking forward to your reply at your
earliest convenience.

1) complain the poor quality of the dictionary, and

  I would appreciate it very much if you could give me the refund。

  Sincerely yours,

2) give reasons for your complaints.

  如能退款,不胜感激

  Zhang Wei

Dear Mr. Wang, (大家注意此处是逗号)

  I strongly insist that you change…as soon as possible。

  【点评】

As a regular customer, I am writing this letter to complain about the
quality of dictionary bought from the bookone.com.

  我强烈要求尽快换.。。

  这一次的小作文很中规中矩,题目是之前就在英语一中考[微博]过的投诉信,投诉的产品也是考生很熟悉的学习用具——电子词典。投诉信在开头就表明写信的目的,给出一句套话。接着第二段开始写出投诉的内容,具体说明问题有哪些。第三段表明自己期望的结果以及用一句套话表明自己的期待问题。在这里还需要提醒的是小作文的字数是在100字左右,可以是80到120字之间,但是由于小作文答题卡的位置特别有限,所以如果写到了100字以上,会显得非常拥挤。因此小作文在保证清楚表达意思的情况下尽量用一些简单的句式,尽量不要追求像大作文那样复杂且多变的句式。

I ordered an Oxford Dictionary of Contemporary English a week ago. Apart
from the delayed delivery, many pages in the dictionary are missing and
some of the pages are reversed, which are totally unacceptable to me.

  I trust you will take my comlaints seriously and.。。

  【投诉信开头常用句式和套话】

I would like to get a refund or at least change it for a new one. And I
trust that you will now consider this matter seriously and make an
effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind.

  我相信你会认真对待我的投诉,并且.。。

  I wish to draw your attention to the problem/fault…that I bought…

Yours sincerely, (逗号)

  三、模拟预测大练兵

  I am writing to advise you that I find…unsatisfactory.

Li Ming(无符号,千万不要打点)

  Directions:

  It is with great reluctance that I must inform you that…

建议信

  Suppose you have been cheated by anadvertisement in a magazine;write
a letter of about 100 words to the government officer complaining about
the bad effect the ad brought to you。

  【投诉信结尾常用句式和套话】

Write a letter to your university canteen, making suggestions for
improving its service. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET
.

  优秀范文:

  I must have you fully understand that without a satisfying solution,
I will reserve my right to take legal action.

Dear Sir or Madam,

  Dear Gentlemen,

  I would like to have this matter settled by the end of…

I am a student of our university, who often have meals in our canteen.
Generally speaking, our canteen provides quite good food. However, I
still have some suggestions for you to make our canteen more popular
among students.

  Enclosed is an ad which appeared in a magazine for adevice which was
claimed to cure back problems。

  I understand you will give immediate attention to this matter.

To begin with, I wonder whether you could provide more varieties of
food. We do not have many options when eating in our canteen now. To
continue, some students have complained about the price of the food
there, would you please lower it down?

  Four months ago I mailed the money that ordered andsoon received the
device and instruction for its use. My mother followed these
instructions to the letter.Not only did her back pain persist, but in
soon it began to worsen. After a month she stopped using the device and
made an appointment with her doctor 。“These devices are worthless,”the
doctor said. I told the company of the experience, and asked for a
refund. They didn’t even respond。

  英语作文是典型的慢工出细活,日积月累,方能有成。祝各位考生能够按照自己的计划踏踏实实走好每一步,到达理想的彼岸。

I do hope to have a better canteen. And I would be highly grateful if
you could take my suggestions into consideration.

  I would be grateful if you could do something to put astop to these
deceptive ads and the continuing exploitation of other backache
sufferers。

  文章来源:文都教育

Yours sincerely,

  Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

  FrankSimth

询问信

  希望通过今天都教授的讲解,考场上一旦出现要求考生写投诉信的考题,考生们都能下笔有神,游刃有余的写出一篇理想文章。坚持者能在命运风暴中奋斗,考生们,再坚持几天,你们就将迎来曙光。预祝各位考生都能取得自己满意的成绩!(来源:文都教育)

Write a letter inquiring a travel agency about the trip to Mount
Huangshan. Some necessary details must be included. Do not sign your own
name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to travel to Mount Huangshan this summer. I would be most
grateful if you could send me information regarding the following
aspects.

First, my family will come with me. Therefore, I would like to know the
details about this trip, such as the accommodation, the plans and the
money it will cost. Besides, how do you deliver these materials to me?
What’s the deadline before we make the final decision? How do I pay for
you?

Thank you for your attention. I am looking forward to your immediate
response.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

申请信:

Directions:

You want to apply for the following job: a personal secretary to the
general manager, write a letter to Mr. Byron to:

1) show your interest,

2) describe yourself, and

3) explain why you would be suitable for the job.

Dear Mr. Byron,

I am writing to apply for(求职) the position as the personal secretary
to the general manager./(求学)(the opportunity for further study in your
university).

I am fully confident that I am the right candidate. To begin with, I
major in secretary and will graduate from Peking University. I have a
good academic performance in school and have been the top five students
for four years in my grade. In addition, I am an open-minded,
cooperative and ready-to-help girl.

Enclosed is my resume to provide additional information. Thank you for
your time and consideration. I am looking forward to your reply at your
earliest convenience.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

请求信

Directions: You find your study load is too heavy. Write a letter to
your college teacher: 1) you need to withdraw from two courses,

2) explain the reasons,

3) ask if it is possible to obtain a refund.

Dear Professor Smith,

I am writing to formally request to withdraw from two courses:
Introduction to Elementary Education and Teaching Methods.

The main reason for reducing my course load is that I find it extremely
difficult to manage six courses. Because I really have to work part
time, I have no other choice but to decrease my course load. Besides, I
would also like to request a tuition refund. I am sorry for any
inconveniences I have caused by this change in plans.

Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any
questions, please feel free to contact me at 82036600. I look forward to
hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

祝贺信:

Directions:Your friend Smith told you he had started his own business.
Write a letter to him to congratulate him and give him some helpful
suggestions.

Dear Smith,

I was happy to learn that you had opened your own firm and I would like
to express my warmest congratulations.

The final realization of your long-cherished dream should be attributed
to your diligence, persistence and ambition. I am glad that your
consistent pursuit of dream is rewarded now. As a good friend of you, I
advise you to keep your ambition. Moreover, in response to challenges,
please never overestimate the difficulties and underestimate your
ability.

Please accept my congratulations again. And I do believe you and your
firm will achieve one success after another.

Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

 感谢信

Directions:

You have just returned from a visit to a university in Great Britain.
And you were warmly treated there by Professor Smith. Please write a
letter to express your thanks to him for his hospitality.

Dear Prof. Smith,

I would like to thank you very much for your kind hospitality and the
honor you showed me during my recent visit to your university.

It was nice of you to introduce me so many of famous professors and
celebrated scholars at your university. I feel obliged to you for the
selfless assistance you render me. I appreciate it more than I can say.

Finally, I wish I can have an opportunity to repay your kindness when
you come to China in the near future. Again with many thanks.

Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

备忘录

Directions:

Write a memorandum of about 100 words to the student service department
and ask them to fix a telephone for each dormitory. Your Memo should
include:

(1)Your purpose. (2) The reasons. (3)Your sincere hope.

Memo

Date: Aug. 8, 2013

To: The leader of student service department

From: Li Ming

Subject: Telephone fixing

I would like to remind you that we are in need of a telephone for each
dormitory. As university students, we need to cope with the daily
increasing communications with teachers, friends and people outside the
campus.

We need a telephone to get and send message, which is important for us.
Though most of us have mobile phones and e-mail address, a telephone in
the dormitory is after all the most convenient and cheapest tool of
communication.

I hope that you will pay attention to this problem and solve it as soon
as possible.

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